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Anonymous
05-04-2004, 06:13 PM
Dear teacher,
Please correct and suggest the better ones.

A)
1)Maybe I haven’t understood a parental love until I become a father.
2)Today’s so sunny day. I don’t want to go out without a hat.
3)It’s easy to have headache if you go out with bareheaded in this sunny season.
4)I always see English police taking/ wearing their helmets.
5)All motorcyclist have to take/ wear a crash helmet in this stretch of road.
6)Do you only have to wear a crash helmet in a number of some special stretch of road or have to wear it whenever you ride on motorcycle?
7)Is it possible to let bareheaded (without crash helmet) when is riding motorcycle in your country?
8)It is said that taking/wearing a crash helmet has helped the motorcyclist avoid concussion of the brain in the traffic accidents.
9)He’s a mental boy. He hasn’t been able to take care himself.

B)
1)Who will be your partner in the dance/ball to night?
2)I have forgotten how to dance the Waltz.
3)The dance floor is very large. It must be enough place for everybody here.
4)How often do you go to discotheque?
5)Do you think that discotheque is a good place to come?
6)There are a lot of different kinds of traditional dances in my country.
7)Is ballet one of a kind of traditional or modern dance?

Thanks a lot.

Pete
05-05-2004, 01:11 PM
A)
1)Maybe I <strike>haven't understood a</strike> didn't understand parental love until I become a father.
2)Today's so sunny <strike>day</strike>. [Or: Today's such a sunny day.] I don't want to go out without a hat. [Ok.]
3)It's easy to have a headache if you go out with bareheaded in this sunny season.
4)I always see English police <strike>taking/</strike> wearing their helmets.
5)All motorcyclists have to <strike>take/</strike> wear <strike>a</strike> crash helmets in this stretch of road.
6)Do you only have to wear a crash helmet <strike>in</strike> on a number of <strike>some</strike> special stretches of road, or do you have to wear it whenever you ride on a motorcycle?
7)Is it possible to <strike>let</strike> be bareheaded (without crash helmet) when <strike>is</strike> you are riding a motorcycle in your country?
8)It is said that taking/wearing a crash helmet has helped <strike>the</strike> motorcyclists avoid concussion of the brain in <strike>the</strike> traffic accidents.
9)He's a <strike>mental</strike> mentally retarded boy. He hasn't been able to take care himself. [Ok.]

B)
1)Who will be your partner <strike>in</strike> at the dance/ball to night?
2)I have forgotten how to dance the Waltz. [Ok.]
3)The dance floor is very large. <strike>It must be enough place</strike> There must be enough room for everybody here.
4)How often do you go to the/a discotheque?
5)Do you think that the discotheque is a good place to come?
6)There are a lot of different kinds of traditional dances in my country. [Ok.]
7)Is ballet <strike>one of</strike> a kind of traditional or modern dance?