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[ren]

Please correct the following and make better

1."I have a list of Manufactureres and suppliers of various products. The products are posted in their websites but price is not listed. I mean we need to request a quote. Where do you want me to post these websites? "

2. " To be honest, your website is going to be a marvelous and enlightening! I feel very fortunate to be a part of it by working for you . ( any other way to say this) I wish you all the best ! "

3. "I completed all the exercises and have a doubt in the following 2 questions. "

4. "I think, it makes the sentence more meaningful. "( any other way to say this)


Teacher, the following is a question to u not for correction ..ok

I am doing a online job for developing a web directory. My category - shopping .I post several websites regarding online Shopping . but a website like , www.jugaltraders.net , can i post under online shopping ? or shall I create another sub folder 'retail shops '? or any other suitable name ?

The sites I post under online shopping , in all the price is listed ...but in the above website we need to request a quote. but i understand that we can order online , right?

What is ur suggestion? Else shall I create two subfolders under online shopping ( one price is given , other we need to request a quote ) How should I name these two sub-categories? please advice

thanks in advence

[Pete]

Please correct the following and make better

1."I have a list of Manufactureres and suppliers of various products. The products are posted in their websites but price is not listed. I mean we need to request a quote. Where do you want me to post these websites? "

2. " To be honest, your website is going to be a marvelous and enlightening! I feel very fortunate to be a part of it by working for you . ( any other way to say this) I wish you all the best ! "

3. "I completed all the exercises and have a doubt in the following 2 questions. "

4. "I think, it makes the sentence more meaningful. "( any other way to say this)


Teacher, the following is a question to u not for correction ..ok

I am doing a online job for developing a web directory. My category - shopping .I post several websites regarding online Shopping . but a website like , www.jugaltraders.net , can i post under online shopping ? or shall I create another sub folder 'retail shops '? or any other suitable name ?

The sites I post under online shopping , in all the price is listed ...but in the above website we need to request a quote. but i understand that we can order online , right?

What is ur suggestion? Else shall I create two subfolders under online shopping ( one price is given , other we need to request a quote ) How should I name these two sub-categories? please advice

thanks in advence

Here are some suggestions/ideas:

1."I have a list of Manufactureres and suppliers of various products. The products are posted in their websites but price is not listed. I mean we need to request a quote.There are certain websites that list manufacturers' products without giving the prices, instead requiring a potential customer to request a quote. Where do you want me to post these websites?"

2. " To be honest, your website is going to be a marvelous and enlightening! I feel very fortunate to be a part of it by working for you . ( any other way to say this) I wish you all the best ! "
-- I really can't say what to do with this. So much depends on the relationship between you and the person to whom this is addressed. Is this your boss? Another co-worker? Your client? Did the person ask a question for which this is the specific reply, or is this an unsolicited comment on your part? As it stands, I think the recipient would feel embarrassed to receive it. If you are being paid to do something, you certainly are expected to be doing everything you can to ensure the best results; "wishing" your employer the best sounds as if you might thing that your good wishes are sufficient. Maybe try:

> I certainly think that the website we are creating will be very useful and informative. I feel fortunate to be part of the project.

3. "I completed all the exercises and tasks, but I have a doubt in the following 2 questions. two specific questions for you:"

4. "I think it makes the sentence more meaningful. "( any other way to say this)
-- I removed the comma. Your sentence is OK. The following might better say what you intended:
> I think it makes the sentence better express your idea/meaning.

Teacher, the following is a question to u not for correction ..ok

I am doing a online job for developing a web directory. My category - shopping .I post several websites regarding online Shopping . but a website like , www.jugaltraders.net , can i post under online shopping ? or shall I create another sub folder 'retail shops '? or any other suitable name ?

The sites I post under online shopping , in all the price is listed ...but in the above website we need to request a quote. but i understand that we can order online , right?

What is ur suggestion? Else shall I create two subfolders under online shopping ( one price is given , other we need to request a quote ) How should I name these two sub-categories? please advice

thanks in advence
It depends on the intent of your website, its intended audience, and what that audience will probably expect or find most useful. If it is a place that someone would physically go to, you might call it a retail shop. If it allows online access only, I'd say "online shopping" is appropriate, even without direct online ordering. I looked at the site, and even though it has entries marked "view cart" and "check out", I could not see a way to put an item into your "cart" to order it. Still, I presume that if you request a quote, their reply should give you some way to order on line.