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english_student
03-10-2007, 05:58 AM
Hello there!
Could any one of you please check if there is any error in the following :

Hey Susan, check out the following article.

http://www.wri.org/pubs/pubs_description.cfm?pid=3719

I think its the best article I have found so far on the petroleum industry. It talks about general environmental reporting for petroleum companies as well as about shareholder value.

Would it be OK to use the word 'about' twice in the above sentence?

Thanks in advance.:cool:

Rusty
03-11-2007, 05:29 AM
Hello there!
Could any one of you please check if there is any error in the following :

Would it be OK to use the word 'about' twice in the above sentence?

Thanks in advance.:cool:
I think that sounds OK. You could drop the second "about" if you wish.

english_student
03-11-2007, 06:11 AM
Thanks a million, Rusty.