Please correct

[ren]

Teacher,

I want to put Mr. Mansih's ( a fashion designer) review under fashion designer category. Infact he is a fashion designer.Here we go

Please correct the following


" I don't know whether it is my mistake or yours, Mr.Manish Malhotra's review is posted under " Great Dancer" . Please create a new category "Great Fashion Designers" and put his review under the same." ( Teacher, is it ok if I write " under the same" , the review was posted under " great Dancers" but i want to post it under " great fashion deisgners. )


Thanks

[SomeOne]

Teacher,

I want to put Mr. Mansih's ( a fashion designer) review under fashion designer category. Infact he is a fashion designer.Here we go

Please correct the following


" I don't know whether it is my mistake or yours, Mr.Manish Malhotra's review is posted under " Great Dancer" . Please create a new category "Great Fashion Designers" and put his review under the same." ( Teacher, is it ok if I write " under the same" , the review was posted under " great Dancers" but i want to post it under " great fashion deisgners. )


Thanks

That's what I can suggest with the first sight.

"Hallo, Mr Manish! I'm not sure if it is my mistake or yours, that Malhotra's review was posted under the "Great Dancer" category, but I'd like to ask you to set up a new category, "Great Fashion Designers", and move this review in there. Thanks in advance!"